英语翻译While the number of infected people remains small,the appearance of the new virus has shaken China,where memories of the crippling 2003 outbreak of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome epidemic remain fresh.Unlike with SARS,the government ha

英语翻译While the number of infected people remains small,the appearance of the new virus has shaken China,where memories of the crippling 2003 outbreak of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome epidemic remain fresh.Unlike with SARS,the government ha
英语翻译
While the number of infected people remains small,the appearance of the new virus has shaken China,where memories of the crippling 2003 outbreak of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome epidemic remain fresh.Unlike with SARS,the government has vowed to be transparent and promised to release information about H7N9 as quickly as possible,though many in China remain skeptical.虽然感染人数仍然不多,但新出现的这种病毒还是令中国感到恐慌.中国人仍然清晰地记得2003年爆发的严重影响人类健康的SARS病毒.和上次处理SARS疫情不同的是,中国政府誓言做到透明,并承诺尽快公布有关H7N9禽流感的信息.但许多中国人仍持怀疑态度.

英语翻译While the number of infected people remains small,the appearance of the new virus has shaken China,where memories of the crippling 2003 outbreak of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome epidemic remain fresh.Unlike with SARS,the government ha
翻译得不错,这样就可以了

其实对于翻译的话，同样是一句话有很多种说法，这就是语言的奥秘，个人认为，只要是意思表达清楚就OK了。

虽然感染人数仍然不多，但新出现的这种病毒还是令中国感到恐慌。2003年爆发的严重影响人类健康的SARS病毒还就在眼前。与SARS疫情不同的是，尽管有许多中国人仍持怀疑态度，但中国政府誓言做到透明，并承诺尽快公布有关H7N9禽流感的信息。

While the number of
infected people remains small, the appearance of the new virus has shaken China, where
memories of the crippling 2003 outbreak of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome
epid...

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While the number of
infected people remains small, the appearance of the new virus has shaken China, where
memories of the crippling 2003 outbreak of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome
epidemic remain fresh. Unlike with SARS, the government has vowed to be transparent
and promised to release information about H7N9 as quickly as possible, though
many in China
remain skeptical. 虽然感染人数仍然不多，但新出现的这种病毒还是令中国感到恐慌。中国人仍然清晰地记得2003年爆发的严重影响人类健康的SARS病毒。和上次处理SARS疫情不同的是，中国政府誓言做到透明，并承诺尽快公布有关H7N9禽流感的信息。但许多中国人仍持怀疑态度。

而感染者数量还很小，新病毒的出现动摇了中国，那里的瘫痪2003年爆发的严重急性呼吸综合征流行的记忆保持新鲜。不同于“非典”，政府将是透明的，承诺将尽快发布信息h7n9，尽管很多中国人仍持怀疑态度。虽然感染人数仍然不多，但新出现的这种病毒还是令中国感到恐慌。中国人仍然清晰地记得2003年爆发的严重影响人类健康的SARS病毒。和上次处理SARS疫情不同的是，中国政府誓言做到透明，并承诺尽快公布有关h7n9禽流感的信息但许多中国人仍持怀疑态度。

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“严重影响人类健康”属于“过译”范畴。原句中并无此提法。

翻译得很好，完全OK。