Our class have had a discussing recently on whether it is necessary to start learning English fromchildhood.Some for it.As little boys and girls have had a very good memory,they can learn a lot of English works by heart very day.This will help their

Our class have had a discussing recently on whether it is necessary to start learning English fromchildhood.Some for it.As little boys and girls have had a very good memory,they can learn a lot of English works by heart very day.This will help their
Our class have had a discussing recently on whether it is necessary to start learning English from
childhood.Some for it.As little boys and girls have had a very good memory,they can learn a lot of English works by heart very day.This will help their future English learning.While others don’t agree.They think children have to learning Chinese pinyin at school.If they study Chinese pinyin and English at same time,it will be very easy for them to mix it up……英语文章改错

Our class have had a discussing recently on whether it is necessary to start learning English fromchildhood.Some for it.As little boys and girls have had a very good memory,they can learn a lot of English works by heart very day.This will help their
Some （are）for it
English works （words）
don’t (did'nt)agree过去式
They think (thought)过去式
have(had) to 过去式
learning(learn原形) Chinese
at (the应该加上)same time

第一句的have 去掉，第二个把had 去掉 learning改为learn at后加the it 改成them

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