帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法哪位帮我修改一下下面的这段英语有没有语法上的错误,It is my live,but without you.How is it?i can't answer.i love you over all the things what i can see and what i can feel,even over my l

帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法哪位帮我修改一下下面的这段英语有没有语法上的错误,It is my live,but without you.How is it?i can't answer.i love you over all the things what i can see and what i can feel,even over my l
帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法
哪位帮我修改一下下面的这段英语有没有语法上的错误,
It is my live,but without you.How is it?i can't answer.i love you over all the things what i can see and what i can feel,even over my live.But,in my live,there is only me.i can see everything but not the girl who i love.You were my best dream but also my worst dream what i everynight have.i'm waiting for you like i'm waiting for the end of my live.

帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法哪位帮我修改一下下面的这段英语有没有语法上的错误,It is my live,but without you.How is it?i can't answer.i love you over all the things what i can see and what i can feel,even over my l
I have my life,but I don't have you.How is that?I have no answer.I love you more than anything I see and feel,more than my own life.But in my life there's just me.I have everything but (you) the girl I love.You were my loveliest dream and also my every night's nightmare.I'll be waiting for you till the end of my life./until the day that I die./ as long as I live.

如果只修改语法的话:
It is my life, but without you, how is it? I can't answer, I love you beyond all the things that I can see and feel, even my life. But in my life, there is only me, I can see everything...

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如果只修改语法的话:
It is my life, but without you, how is it? I can't answer, I love you beyond all the things that I can see and feel, even my life. But in my life, there is only me, I can see everything but the girl who I love, you are by best dream and also my worst dream that I have every night, I'm waiting for you like waiting for the end of my life.
但愿看这个文章的女孩是中国人,否则如果是老外,可能基本无法理解你想表达的感情含义.
稍微修改下: How my life could be without you? I have no answer. I love you more than anything in my life even life itself. But it seems the only thing I can't have is you, you have been by best dream and also the worst dream that I have every night, I will be waiting till the end of my life.
意思有改动,希望和你本意相同.

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It is my live(life),but without you,How is it?I can't answer,I love you over all the things what I can see and feel,even my live.Howerer,there is only me in my life.I can see everything but without th...

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It is my live(life),but without you,How is it?I can't answer,I love you over all the things what I can see and feel,even my live.Howerer,there is only me in my life.I can see everything but without the girl whom I love.You are not only my best dream but also my worst dream which I have everynight.I'm waiting for you as well as waiting fo the end of my live
生命 生活 用life
but不可以独立成句，however可以
my worst dream what I everynight ave 中每夜属于时间状语，最后放后，另外have dream 即what应改为 which指代 dream
I都是大写，不管前面是逗号还是句号

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