帮忙改修改几个小句子Tian’anmen Gate is the Center of beijing that is the Capital of china . Tian’anmen Gate is South side of Imperial Palace,and near the changan road .on October 1, 1949 The People's Republic of China has held the found

帮忙改修改几个小句子Tian’anmen Gate is the Center of beijing that is the Capital of china . Tian’anmen Gate is South side of Imperial Palace,and near the changan road .on October 1, 1949 The People's Republic of China has held the found
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Tian’anmen Gate is the Center of beijing that is the Capital of china . Tian’anmen Gate is South side of Imperial Palace,and near the changan road .on October 1, 1949 The People's Republic of China has held the founding ceremony in here. Chairman Mao in the speech announced that the People's Republic of China was founding. After this event ,Tiananmen becomes the modern China's symbol, Tiananmen has more than 500 years history,it record chinese people brave, Strong, Striving for free .
天安门坐落在中华人民共和国首都北京的市中心,故宫的南侧,与天安门广场隔长安街相望,.1949年10月1日,中华人民共和国在这里举行了开国大典,毛主席在讲话上宣告中华人民共和国成立.天安门由此成为现代中国的象征,天安门有500多年的历史,它记录了中国人民勇敢,坚强,争取自由
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帮忙改修改几个小句子Tian’anmen Gate is the Center of beijing that is the Capital of china . Tian’anmen Gate is South side of Imperial Palace,and near the changan road .on October 1, 1949 The People's Republic of China has held the found
Tian’anmen stands in the center of Beijing ,the capital of China .It is in the south of the Imperial Palace ,and you can see the Tian'anmen Square across the Changan street .on October 1,1949 The People's Republic of China had held the founding ceremony here.Chairman Mao announced that the People's Republic of China was founded in the speech.From then on,Tia'nanmen becomes the modern China's symbol.Tian'anmen has a more than 500 years history,which records the bravery,the strength and the fighting for the freedom of the Chinese people.
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Tian’anmen Gate is located in the Center of Beijing,the captital city of china ,and the south of Imperial Palace,opposite Chang'an Street .on October 1, 1949 ,The People's Republic of China held the f...

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Tian’anmen Gate is located in the Center of Beijing,the captital city of china ,and the south of Imperial Palace,opposite Chang'an Street .on October 1, 1949 ,The People's Republic of China held the founding ceremony here. In the speech Chairman Mao declared that the People's Republic of China was founded. After that ,Tian'anmen Gate has become the Modern China's symbol. Tian'anmen Gate has more than 500 years' history,it records Chinese people's braveness, Strongness and Striving for freedom.

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