帮我改改这段短文的错误.有错的话就指出,没有的话就说全对.Last Sunday,Mr Li took our class to nuring home to visit the olds.Because we have 50 students,So we divided us into four groups.In the nuring home,according our plan,fiv

帮我改改这段短文的错误.有错的话就指出,没有的话就说全对.Last Sunday,Mr Li took our class to nuring home to visit the olds.Because we have 50 students,So we divided us into four groups.In the nuring home,according our plan,fiv
帮我改改这段短文的错误.
有错的话就指出,没有的话就说全对.
Last Sunday,Mr Li took our class to nuring home to visit the olds.Because we have 50 students,So we divided us into four groups.
In the nuring home,according our plan,five students played chess with the old people.ten students talked to then.15 students washed the old people's clothes.The other students were to helping clean the nuring home.At last,we were singing and dancing.We all have a wonderful day

帮我改改这段短文的错误.有错的话就指出,没有的话就说全对.Last Sunday,Mr Li took our class to nuring home to visit the olds.Because we have 50 students,So we divided us into four groups.In the nuring home,according our plan,fiv
Last Sunday,Mr Li took our class to a nuring home to visit the old.Because there're 50 students of us,we were divided into four groups.
In the nuring home,according to our plan,five students played chess with the old people.ten students talked to them.15 students washed the old people's clothes.The others were to help clean the nuring home.At last,we sang and danced.We all had a wonderful day !

Last Sunday, Mr Li took our class to a nuring home to visit the old. Because we have 50 students, we divided ourselves into four groups.
In the nuring home, according our plan, five students pla...

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Last Sunday, Mr Li took our class to a nuring home to visit the old. Because we have 50 students, we divided ourselves into four groups.
In the nuring home, according our plan, five students played chess with the old people. Ten students talked to (or, with) them. 15 students washed the old people's clothes. The other students were helping them clean the nuring home. At last, we sang and danced together. We all had a wonderful day.

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Last Sunday, Mr Li took our class to a nuring home to visit the old. We were divided into four groups because there were 50 students of us.
In the nuring home, according to our plan, five of us ...

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Last Sunday, Mr Li took our class to a nuring home to visit the old. We were divided into four groups because there were 50 students of us.
In the nuring home, according to our plan, five of us played chess with the old, ten of us chatted with them, fifteen of us washed their clothes, and the rest cleaned the nuring home.
At last, we sang and danced. We all had a wonderful day.

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